here's my 1st attempt, this is for a resort at the mountain slope, where the selling point is -of course- the mountain breeze, the trees, the fresh air, the flowers and greeneries, a relaxing place, escape from the hectic city life.
that's why i want the 'relax' to be a very relax type (T_T erm i dont hv enough collection) i want it to be a...un-formal, the slacking type, the friendly one. and followed by a clean cut and simple 'inn' so that the contrast stand out and also as to say... 'guarantee good service'
personally i like the 1st relax. just that it is too straight :( or maybe the last one. but i dont like the R.
for the colour i like the last one, but then.. it kinda more to sea side then mountain slope bcoz it's turquoise. maybe the 4th one.. i want a very light feel, easy, something... smooting relaxing. a relax feel that you get when you are near the greeneries. (*colors might appear abit different on other screens)
critique and opinion on how to improve please :D :D :D
3 comments:
These are some variations of a hotel logo, right? You need to choose 4 or maybe 5 to show them to your client
I don't really have much comment. My first impression to a 'Relax Inn', is that I prefer a leaning, italic, cursive font. It gives a more relaxed feeling to the eye, as though you need to slumber your head side ways to read it. :)
What about color - I like 4th and 5th too... But remember - though it's not a supermarket logo there must be some contrast for people could simply read the sign.
What about the type - #3 looks good to me. But it would be better if there was some space between "X" and "i".
The last one is good for outdoor advertising - they could use Duralight for inexpensive sign, but "inn" should be a little bolder, I think. In both cases "Relax" and "inn" should not blend with each other - "inn" should be bolder, or smaller, or lower...
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